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FunnyBones
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since 2007-07-04
Posts 13


0 posted 2007-07-04 05:36 PM



The wind shifts just a little and I
Feel a spider creeping down my spine.
A movement of air and he's back again
The madman moves in and takes over my mind

And there's something in me,
that you you can't see
and there's something in me,
What could it be.

I hear the words after they've left my mouth
I know for a fact they didn't come from me
the madman deceives me with impossible logic
I chase my tail, chase it passionately

and the darkness enfolds me
and I have to agree
and my friends they all hate me
And I feel so dirty

There's no reason to fight
when the insanity feels right
theres no place to run
when being cruel is such fun
I dont want to stop
I want to hurt you some more
I dont think about
how I loved you before.



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froggy
Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
1 posted 2007-07-04 06:37 PM


I like it.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2007-07-04 09:59 PM


sounds as though you want to hurt for being hurt... ?  sometimes that's how love makes us feel...

However you meant it, I enjoyed

hugs, g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

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