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Open Poetry #40

This Loss I Feel

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-07-04 07:09 AM

This Loss I Feel

"I could escape this feeling,
with my China girl.
I feel a wreak without my,
little China Girl."..David Bowie

I don't enjoy
this pain I feel,
but its mine
to bear the
loss is real.

So many layers
of pain revealed,
my heart broken
by my China girl.

JamesLee
04July
2007

Jenna
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since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

1 posted 2007-07-04 07:20 AM

beautiful!

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2007-07-04 07:27 AM

I've always loved that song ... and I enjoyed the inspiration it brought to your words, James.

Best wishes,
/Kit

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-07-04 04:57 PM

Thank you Jenna and Kit for the nice responses...James

paullallady
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since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

4 posted 2007-07-04 07:45 PM

such a sad writing this is. I love the part where you "own" your pain.

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