Let us pray - a Three by eight or Oct-Tri for short

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Open Poetry #40

Let us pray - a Three by eight or Oct-Tri for short

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2007-07-03 07:39 PM

tomorrow
no time to be sorrow
when colored sparkles lighten the sky

and all the American people will know why
independence, price payed high

let's applaude for soldiers far away
who fight for freedom today
let us pray

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Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

1 posted 2007-07-03 07:53 PM

Titia Geertman,

Yes indeed, this is very good. I like it loads.

Thanks for the neat thought Hon.

Bobby

paullallady
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since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

2 posted 2007-07-04 11:42 PM

YES! beautiful, beautiful and may we all pray for them each and every day.

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2007-07-05 04:39 PM

Thanks for the comments, but I messed up this form terribly by switching lines in the process and forgot to pay attention to the syllable count. Stupid Dutchie me LOL

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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