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paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

0 posted 2007-07-02 06:18 PM

She saw him standing in the light
that was cast from the coffee shop.
Staring, even though it’s not right,
was drawn by him and couldn’t stop.

Choosing to stay and sit awhile,
in order to watch him some more,
she cast him a shy little smile
when he did come through the shop door.

Very soon they began to talk
about all and everything.
Leaving there they went for a walk,
within the closeness the night brings.

Through the long night they wandered there,
pouring out their hearts desires.
Now there was morning in the air,
and their situation was dire.

He was to catch the morning train,
and this magical night must end.
Then as he stood and clasped her hand,
now wasn’t the time to pretend.

Looking down into her blue eyes,
he told her of the love he felt.
She declared too, with a deep sigh
that her own heart did surely melt.

So now she waits in endless hope
he really will return to her.
She does wonder if she could cope,
if memories is all they were.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-07-02 06:50 PM

I love such impressionistic 'slice of life'
writes that tell a fine story!

serious applause!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-07-04 08:05 PM

Nice writing...James

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2007-07-04 09:01 PM

I love this soft, romantic tale which flowed so beautifully upon the page.

It is wonderful to read your work.

Patricia

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2007-07-04 09:37 PM

For some reason this reminds me of john cougar song...there's just something about a poetic story!

enjoyed...

hugs,g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2007-07-05 12:28 PM

A vividly descriptive vignette! I felt as though I was that woman and those were my memories!

EA

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