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Open Poetry #40

Crying Eyes Now See

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-06-30 07:06 PM

Crying Eyes Now See

Once I was in love
with the world
because I was in love
with a girl
who told me
that she loved me.

But time did tell
a different tale
and now this world
doesn't seem so swell,
at least not
the part my crying
eyes now see.

JamesLee
01July
2007

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-06-30 07:54 PM

how sad that "You" lost your love. life is not all that fair.
still very romantic
enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-06-30 08:22 PM

I always try not to say I love you unless I mean it

it's hard with this one I'm with...he's constantly saying it and I feel bad not saying it back

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-07-01 01:06 AM

sadly beautiful James

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-07-01 02:40 AM

Thank you Drauntz, passing shadows and The Lady...
Passing I look at relationships as opportunitys to learn and grow...I like to believe that there are levels of achievement...perhaps he needs someone like you at this time in his life to talk to him about love as a process that takes time to grow...and perhaps you need to have those discussions to sort it out in your own mind...James

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