Open Poetry #40 |
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Delights |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Nothing delights more, when a rainbow came in view. Can I trace where it starts and touch the end? Im sure the colours would taint my heart, giving me a 'lift' and 'high' like none. Nothing delights more, when a moon stand by a star, nothing else, nothing on par. Like friends accompany each other, in the dark night sky. Seems lonely, yet a tinge of sweetness, encompass the two. Wonder what they saying, sweet nothings or sigh of resignation. Nothing delights more, to realise I'm not alone, there's these quiet friends, ever wishing I would take note. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Nothing delights more, to realise I'm not alone," no doubt! ![]() enjoyed this |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The sun, the moon, and the stars do make delightful friends! No one is ever truly alone! ![]() A very sweet write. Love & Sun/Moon/Star Light, EA ![]() |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
thanks for grazing through, my friends. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching glad I didn't miss this one |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
Yeah, you'll always have friends like the sun, stars, and the moon but there will always have clouds that cover up and lie to you. So look out. Also, you need to double check your spelling. Nice work! |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Hi gifted, thanks for the reminder ![]() |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Much enjoyed, keep given us more delightful poems. |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
You're welcome FNG. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
I've tried to edit but was forbidded. Hm, maybe next time I will edit earlier... |
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