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Jenna
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since 2007-03-20
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0 posted 2007-06-30 06:17 AM



The ache
which reaches deep inside of me,
reminds me what it's like to feel
when it seems like nothing else can touch me.

The emptiness
a reminder of the emotions buried
that cannot be expressed in words
only through actions alone.

The power
that is felt
when I know that this is something only I can dictate,
a control that is with me
from the second I wake
to the moment I sleep.

The anger that I feel at myself
the punishments
the sadness
the loneliness that is felt
even when surrounded by crowds of people.

Life becomes a battle,
one that never loses it's fight,
containing an ability to crush me,
leave me powerless
and create questions in my mind
which leave me

wondering
struggling
hoping

If I will ever come out of this whole.

© Copyright 2007 Jenna - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-06-30 08:30 AM


very powerful words Jenna... I hope you are ok... we're here for you   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-06-30 10:44 AM


Nice writing...James
passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-06-30 11:27 AM




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