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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The old dog Sits on a porch In an open backyard He watches As in the distance A white swan Glides upon a blue lake Across his gaze He does not move From where he is The features Do not change Yet he doesn’t bark Only cants a head However limited In mute respect Along perhaps With a little Something else To a scene Too grand And beautiful For his brain . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
evolution, it happened!!!!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Dear Sir John, this is a wonderful poem. Beauty is everywhere if one owns a beautiful heart. even to a dog...I shall highly regard it as a super being because it is, in general, loyal to human than human itself. life is beautiful, sir!!! have a great day!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another fine piece |
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