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Open Poetry #40

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-06-29 02:04 PM

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The old dog
Sits on a porch
In an open backyard

He watches
As in the distance
A white swan
Glides upon a blue lake
Across his gaze

He does not move
From where he is
The features
Do not change

Yet he doesn’t bark
Only cants a head
However limited

In mute respect
Along perhaps
With a little
Something else

To a scene
Too grand
And beautiful
For his brain

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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-06-29 02:18 PM

evolution, it happened!!!!!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-06-29 02:23 PM

Dear Sir John,

this is a wonderful poem. Beauty is everywhere if one owns a beautiful heart.
even to a dog...I shall highly regard it as a super being because it is, in general, loyal to human than human itself.

life is beautiful, sir!!!

have a great day!!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-06-29 03:57 PM

Enjoyed...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-06-29 08:58 PM

another fine piece

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