Open Poetry #40 |
The Hopeful Gardener |
Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
One seed, one chance, one life that he holds. His eyes shiver although, it's a hot summer day. Each swallow is sharp, and stabs the back of his throat, with memories of despair. Each step he takes brings him higher on a ladder of uncertainty. He's nervous, and enthusiastic, sweat glands dance in his palm. The salty secretion, and dirt stained crevices, create a crude sand. Along with sea shores of anxiety in each of his hands. Does he compress his fists firmly, to show his affection towards the unborn green plant? Perhaps he can not go through with it no longer, and wishes to terminate all the possibilities cocooned in his head, that have been waiting to spread out it's wings of reality. But his dreams seem to stay buried, just as his prior attempts to a garden. Is his green thumb nothing but gangrene, that has only been spreading to his attempts for success? No, he will not be at the mercy of failure. So in one last desperate attempt, he hesitantly reaches for his pick. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful. very good. life should be like this. You write well. enjoyed |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
Thank you. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
I enjowed this one very much and will be looking for the next one,, or two adagio |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
Glad to hear you feel that way adagio. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. |
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