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Open Poetry #40

Summer

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-06-28 03:09 PM

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Cornflowers
On a hill

A single cardinal
Perched alone
On a branch

Sun’s light
On soft hair
Flowing over

An elongated
Slender
Letter S

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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-06-28 03:18 PM

Sweet simplicity.

~ So Zen. So sensuous. So fine.

Love & Summer Light,

EA

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-06-28 05:03 PM

This is how one takes a picture

S1..view in window
S2..focus on a tree and a bird
S3..focus more on the bird to see the hairs
S4. zoom out to the widest angle.

The elongated S might mean
1. a girl by the tree.
2. her hairs.
3. the sunlight on the hills
4. the profile of the blue hills
5. or the profile of the bird

a beautiful poem.

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