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Joty
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since 2007-05-03
Posts 15
Florida

0 posted 2007-06-28 01:44 PM



BEGINNING OF THE END

Spiraling our of control,
Words that cut like a knife,
I keep asking myself,
That happened to my life.

Can't think anymore,
Feel like running away,
No idea what to do,
No idea what to say.

My head is just pounding,
Tears falling like rain,
A marriage so broken,
With no one to blame.

We drifted apart,
No longer best friends,
A lifetime of memories,
The beginning of the end.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-06-28 04:19 PM


Nice writing...James
Fairplay
Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222
England
2 posted 2007-06-28 09:00 PM


You got it in One
well rather more than one

clichés rather spoil stuff when too many are used... for me anyway

Eric

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