Open Poetry #40 |
THE BEGINNINGN OF THE END |
Joty Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 15Florida |
BEGINNING OF THE END Spiraling our of control, Words that cut like a knife, I keep asking myself, That happened to my life. Can't think anymore, Feel like running away, No idea what to do, No idea what to say. My head is just pounding, Tears falling like rain, A marriage so broken, With no one to blame. We drifted apart, No longer best friends, A lifetime of memories, The beginning of the end. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
You got it in One well rather more than one clichés rather spoil stuff when too many are used... for me anyway Eric |
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