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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-06-28 12:48 PM

SummerRise

To be wild, a coyote call moon
Radiance levitates highest June
That summons aurora to wink
Cotton spun, as if candy just pink

On the drench of the musk laden air
Hovers heavy the stillness kept clear
But for now, the sundown with relief
Steals the stars in full fledged disbelief

To be wild, this returned pagan rite
Every voice in the pack echoes bright
Raising tingled response down the spine
SummerRise, at all gloss to define

Copyright Kkh 6/27/07

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-06-28 12:56 PM

beautiful always

enjoyed

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-06-28 11:50 AM

A wonderful read, dear Kathleen!

Love,
Margherita

PoloniusFicklebottom
Junior Member

since 2007-06-27

Posts 17

3 posted 2007-06-28 11:53 AM

Dearest Diamond,
I especially enjoyed how you came back to the wolves at the end there.
-Ficklebottom!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2007-06-28 11:54 AM

enjoyed the a lot...

very beautiful

lacydee
Member

since 2007-06-17

Posts 130
Indiana

5 posted 2007-06-28 01:13 PM

very peaceful enjoyable read. Dee

as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2007-06-28 02:17 PM

Peaceful, serene and a beautiful picture you paint with your words Kathleen. Nicely done.

No more hangin' on to the past
No more filling up my tomorrows
With yesterday's sorrows
No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt}

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2007-06-28 06:40 PM

I especially LOVE:

“coyote-call” moon;

heavy….stillness hover(ing) on musk laden air;

AND:

the “sundown steal(ing)…stars …in disbelief(!)”

Applause for the fine imagery in this summertime ‘write’!

RogueandPoet
Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 126
Oregon

8 posted 2007-06-28 07:21 PM

Exceptional imagery.....

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2007-07-01 01:02 AM

there is always such a richness in your words TD

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