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dingusjr
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0 posted 2007-06-26 01:51 PM



Honey,
I'm really not tuning you out.
Scientists say their tests show
males respond to lower voices.
Like back in the cave,
if we heard a simian grunt..
we could reach for our club.

But males don't respond well to higher voices.
Like we are thinking we can deal with that later.

So I am really not ignoring you, honey.
It's genetic.
O.K. Honey?
Honey?



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Robert Jordan
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1 posted 2007-06-26 04:55 PM


Dingusjr,

There you go.  It's a good line.  I'll have to try it.

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2 posted 2007-06-26 06:28 PM


LOL
wouldn't that be great if it actually worked?!

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3 posted 2007-06-26 07:52 PM


I got a kick out of this

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4 posted 2007-06-26 09:02 PM


LOL.  Nice try although it's not going to work.  However, it's somewhat true.
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5 posted 2007-06-26 09:44 PM


Hmmmm...you seem to have proof of this theory.  Clearing voice...enjoyed!
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6 posted 2007-06-28 09:17 AM


Ahh, ya make me smile, Lar'-- ya make me smile!

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7 posted 2007-06-28 09:26 AM


Dingus One, methinks ye have something, here! When I get upset, my voice naturally goes up an octave. I now realize that the higher it went ~ the less I have been heard!!!

Thanks for the revelation! I will now use a lower cave woman voice! Now that should get his attention! ~ or scare him into submission! lol


EA

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