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Open Poetry #40

Hymn To Loneliness

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

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0 posted 2007-06-25 11:08 AM

Hymn To Loneliness

You still don't know what is love,
The treasure you've never had,
But you've got used to talk about
It... only with yourself.

You desperately seek the truth
With doors always locked.
In nothingness around you,
Cut off from all this world.

So wildly people you detest,
Can't tell the liar's mask.
About everything yourself
And just yourself you ask.

You seek the answers in your head,
Illusions, childish fears.
Your closed heart's becoming dead,
Your dreams are really weird.

To fall asleep and never wake,
And never see the dawn.
And every petty pace you make
With dubious pride - alone.

Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
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1 posted 2007-06-25 12:00 PM

"You desperately seek the truth
With doors always locked.
In nothingness around you,
Cut off from all this world."

I really liked this part...especially the
"You desperately seek the truth
With doors alwasy locked."
It gave me chills....

This poem was amazing

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-06-25 01:13 PM

good. enjoyed!!!!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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3 posted 2007-06-25 08:53 PM

very raw and powerful write

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