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Making Love Die
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Making Love Die |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Making Love Die I don't care to live in your lie anymore. No I don't. No I don't. No I won't. Deception and lies have a way of making love die. Now I know I must go. Now I know that I don't care to share in a lie. No I don't. No I don't. No I won't. JamesLee 24June 2007 |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
For such a brief poem, this hits with a whallop, James. I liked the repetition and short lines. Well done.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James, not only did your words have impact, but the manner in which you laid them down, did as well! "Deception and lies have a way of making love die." ~ Thatsa fersure! Hugs to you, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so true! You said it! Amen to that!  honesty is always the best policy! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very good. The first time of a negative love poem. show strong feelings. gooood |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I sure understand this. This is so true. |
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