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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2007-06-24 09:01 AM


Hop On

Hop on my Randy dragons back
Ride with me a fantasies track
Go with me to a timeless shore
And we’ll open up a timeless door

We’ll wander in a rainbows mist
Make magic with an egos twist
Whip desire into cream
And put it on a wished for dream

There is no end what we can do
Make candy out of morning’s dew
Change the meaning of each core
End the sad forevermore

Be a phantom of the light
Make butterflies glow at night
Give wishes to all that need
Alleviate the sick of greed

Bring stars to light all paths of way
All this forever and a day

© Copyright 2007 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2007-06-24 09:13 AM


I'll gladly hop aboard and join you and Randy on your magic mission of mercy.

~ If only more men and his pets were of such a philanthropic mindset!

Up, up, and away! I'll be sure to secure my itty bitty 'halo'! lol

Angel loves 'n kisses to both you and Randy Dandy! Ooops! I meant to say, "Dandy Randy"! lol

EA
'n X 2

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2007-06-24 09:24 AM


Earth Angel,
It would be our delight to have you along,
especially an Angel such as you.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2007-06-24 09:34 AM


Thank you! My feathers are fluffed and primed! Tell Randy to get his motor runnin' and we'll head out on the cosmic highway!

Love & Dragontale Dreams,

EA

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2007-06-24 10:08 AM


Earth Angel
You are a lovely angel.

Robert Jordan
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5 posted 2007-06-24 01:06 PM


Seymour Tabin,

Try to avoid the forced rhymes found in this poem.

Bobby

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2007-06-24 01:24 PM


Robert Jordan
One tries but is not always successful. Does that mean you won't be coming? LOL

SmartChick
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7 posted 2007-06-24 04:21 PM


You can count me in on this ride. Another delightful poem. I love it.
passing shadows
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Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2007-06-24 04:54 PM


SmartChick
You are on the list.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2007-06-24 04:55 PM


passing,
Thank you sweetie.

Drauntz
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11 posted 2007-06-24 05:14 PM


another beautiful poem, sir. Very imaginative.

and beautiful as always.

have a wonderful Sunday, sir Tabin!

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2007-06-24 06:01 PM


Drauntz
Once again thank you for a wonderful comment.

Kit McCallum
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13 posted 2007-06-25 05:54 AM


I'll gladly hop on board, Sy! Your imagination is one ride I could never turn down.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2007-06-25 09:13 AM


Kit,
Thank you love, you have the seat right behind me.

nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2007-06-25 07:09 PM


I'm hopping on or at least I would like to go along for the ride

hugs
M

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with you
16 posted 2007-06-25 07:57 PM


you have no idea how much I love this
but? I do love most of yours, don't I

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2007-06-25 09:02 PM


Maureen,
Glad to have you aboard.

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2007-06-25 09:03 PM


SEA
You are a love.

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