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A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2007-06-22 07:34 AM

You Fall - I Fall

You've seen my true face
Through a sorrowful guise,
You've dried my tears,
The thorns in my eyes,
I wish you could hold me
Each time when I cry -
You can deaden the pain.
I wish you were there,
On each step of the way,
You never let me down.

You're the only one left
Who I cherish and trust,
You're now the one
Who can put back the shards,
All together... of a heart,
Broken once, now all new,
Never thinking they're sharp,
Not afraid of the wounds,
Not afraid of my tears,
In this heart hope is you.

If you ever give up,
Then with you I will fall,
If you stay strong enough,
Then with you I will hold.
In your eyes see the dawn -
Till the end I will fight,
If you leave me alone -
Then enfeebled and blind.
You're the light...
If you fall, then I fall...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-06-22 08:59 AM

"Never thinking they're sharp,
Not afraid of the wounds,
Not afraid of my tears,
In this heart hope is you."

loved this part

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-06-22 09:03 AM

I think someone is deeply and irrevocable in love ~ and it shows! May you both live with Light in your lives and never know the dark of day.

A very touching write.

Love & Light,

EA

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

3 posted 2007-06-22 11:19 AM

what a wonderful write to the one who is your strength and safety. beautiful.

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

4 posted 2007-06-25 10:02 AM

Thank you people for your comments.
Only everything is not so fine as you see it.
It was written more than a year ago, anyways - things were different then.

Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

5 posted 2007-06-25 11:53 AM

"If you ever give up,
Then with you I will fall,
If you stay strong enough,
Then with you I will hold."

I loved this part!! This was such an awesome write!!!!!

One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2007-06-25 09:01 PM

I once felt like this about someone

feelings change over time I guess

great write

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