Open Poetry #40 |
Glimpses of you... |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Moments with you Sometimes only glimpses Take my breath away With your smile With your knowing look With your beautiful eyes It sits well with me for now But there will come a time when I am in need of more than glimpses of you I hope there is another moment soon... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you James! I value your comments RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Love and longing beautifully expressed with such tenderness Hope |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Sometimes only glimpses Take my breath away With your smile With your knowing look With your beautiful eyes" oh yes, for sure... enjoyed this |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow, very romantic and beautiful and true in life.. beautiful again. enjoyed |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome back RDB. So good to read you again. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Roniece, sounds like a vivid memory here of love and of needing; it can bring comfort in soul but not in warmth, may your day bring a hug of love and another memory to hold onto my friend, Enjoyed this very much, have a wonderful day and take care. Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully romantic! love this! you've been missed! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
very good, my friend...loved it! jwesley |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you everyone for your comments, they warm my heart RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So sweet!! This is a great write, and who ever he is... What a lucky guy!! Vavavoom!! heeheee... JL What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I responded to this the other day and lost it when I fell off line. I said how beautiful this poem is and how much it touched me. And, days later, it still does. It is lovely - as are you. Alison |
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