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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2007-06-24 07:32 AM



Moments with you
Sometimes only glimpses
Take my breath away
With your smile
With your knowing look
With your beautiful eyes
It sits well with me for now
But there will come a time when
I am in need of more than glimpses of you

I hope there is another moment soon...

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2007 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-06-24 07:36 AM


Nice...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-06-24 07:38 AM


Thank you James! I value your comments RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

HopeS
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3 posted 2007-06-24 08:24 AM


Love and longing beautifully expressed with such tenderness

Hope

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with you
4 posted 2007-06-24 10:08 AM


"Sometimes only glimpses
Take my breath away
With your smile
With your knowing look
With your beautiful eyes"


oh yes, for sure... enjoyed this

Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-06-24 11:22 AM


wow, very romantic and beautiful

and true in life..


beautiful again. enjoyed

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2007-06-24 03:06 PM


Welcome back RDB.  So good to read you again.

Rick
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7 posted 2007-06-24 03:33 PM


Hi Roniece, sounds like a vivid memory here of love and of needing; it can bring comfort in soul but not in warmth, may your day bring a hug of love and another memory to hold onto my friend, Enjoyed this very much, have a wonderful day and take care.

Rick

passing shadows
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8 posted 2007-06-24 05:07 PM


beautifully romantic!

love this!

you've been missed!

jwesley
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9 posted 2007-06-24 05:30 PM


very good, my friend...loved it!

jwesley

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2007-06-24 07:21 PM


thank you everyone for your comments, they warm my heart   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JL
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11 posted 2007-06-25 04:29 PM


So sweet!!
This is a great write, and who ever he is...
What a lucky guy!!  Vavavoom!!
heeheee...

JL

What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively.
~JL

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12 posted 2007-06-26 04:03 AM


I responded to this the other day and lost it when I fell off line.  I said how beautiful this poem is and how much it touched me.  And, days later, it still does.

It is lovely - as are you.

Alison

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