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Hello I'm still here... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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Hello I’m still here Loving you And you Are there Aloof as always Coming closer Moving farther Giving hope Taking it back I go with the flow Ebbs and tides But sometime soon I’ll set myself Free from you And then Maybe I'll know The meaning of Me... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Roniece, when you find the meaning, please let me know my friend, I have been searching over the passed few years, the answer is becoming clearer, but still the years are marching on. Don't want to wait till the end. Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing. Rick |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you Rick... when it comes to me, I'll let you know  I value your comments my friend RDB xBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hey, it's good to see your smiling face again ~ and read your wonderful poetry! "Giving hope Taking it back" ~ Ouch! I've been there and it hurts like hades! But not any more! I found "Me" and may you never lose sight of "You"!  Loving hug, Linda |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Beautiful and beautiful. Good day to you, dear lady!! enjoyed your poem and quite philosophical. Sydney... the most beautiful city in the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I go with the flow Ebbs and tides But sometime soon I’ll set myself Free" Excellent write. I can relate to this verse. JL What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wish I had some great wisdom to share here but I'm in the same boat myself beautiful poem! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you for your comments... I haven't written anything for ages and then suddenly not one but two poems came from my heart Drauntz... yes, Sydney is indeed a very beautiful city to live in ... though we are freezing here at the moment - ok, I'm exaggerating but 15 degrees C is pretty cold for us here!! bbbrrrrrr!!! I hate Winter!! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Roniece I am so happy to be reading your poetry. This is sadly lovely. You are a lovely woman - I see that in every word you write. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you Alison, that was a lovely thing to say RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I understand this all too well, RDB ... sometimes we truly do have to give ourselves the opportunity to move on in order to find ourselves. Not an easy path sometimes ... but I can attest that it is a rewarding one. Much enjoyed this. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Roniece...Throughly enjoyed. Tender and touching...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hello, lady! May your warmest smile be reflected in the eyes of someone very special, who will see and feel the depth of your beauty and grace. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
finely emotive 'write' serious applause!! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
"Giving hope Taking it back" Roniece, I sure know how this feels. And, boy does it hurt. I lived with the lies for a long, long time. Finding myself, has not been easy. I do hope you are able to get free, real soon. Your poem here really hits home. I sure wish we could talk. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I've done this a few times...but wanted to be me and her...James |
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