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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
flurbian composnad skerosh tulus rosentad simplus nexon phelus orschpa doula soznad finelle prosonton eshta losoproniel undanexchlos soma paleesh resultamoz ventah sashplesh soloshkenaz, faloupashas, knorsk soloshkenaz, faloupashas, qvork und tameelcarooshavesk amuk amuk, amuk, caleshma, caleshma amuk |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I actually speak fluent flurbian...and this is the best I've seen! The sleek lines, the drumming accent...the way it tickles the throat, when gasping for breath... I believe you might need a hyphen, just for pause, a safety measure really... Unique and poised display of masterful intent! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...I was thinking I just woke up too early this morning |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Having been born 'n raised in Flurbia, and am a proud Flurburite, I, like TD, am fluent in the Flurbabian language. This poetic piece is fantabulous! It makes me miss my fabulous fabled homeland!   Linda |
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Warrior Bristo Member
since 2007-07-28
Posts 96Arizona |
what the heck kind of language is this!? I've never heard of such a language! I think i am very confused....lol...nice poem though. warrior undefeated |
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