Open Poetry #40 |
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The Magic Dew |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Repost: The Magic Dew I spent the morning collecting dew A little for me a little for you The mist of the morning’s magic bree Just enough for some raspberry tea Than I will horse my Randy and fly Across the blue of a silver sky Into a secret greenery glen And woo her with my magic pen A moth turned butterfly waits for me And God she loves this raspberry tea We sweeten it with nectar of flowers It’s just the thing for romantic hours We walk on a beach of timeless shore Make inroads into evermore And ride the tides in shameless abide On the wiles of our passions tide And though she is a phantom seem I would no other wile or dream |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
YOU and your writing are The mist of morning dew.... that leaves a lovely thought in the minds of all who read.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, T-Man! Oh, yes! I recall this beauty! I doubt that anyone could read it without a smile on their face ~ and in their ![]() You have more sides to you, Poet Man, than Eve has Faces. I must admit, that I am most partial to this aspect! ~ But then, I'm an incurable romantic such as yourself ~ and I'm into the ethereal. ![]() Sweet dreams! EA ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh that darlin Randy dragon ... oh that raspberry dew oh that magic pen of yours ... oh how I adore the rhymes of you what turns a moth to butterfly? a winkie from me sweet Sy-guy. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() *winkie winkie* ![]() |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOOK! You made Janet come back!! ![]() ![]() love this one... |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
how brilliantly these tender words flow, amazing. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sy, I am so glad you reposted this one. I don't remember reading it. This is so beautiful. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...me thinks you have some butterfly in you, as well! ![]() |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very beautiful. a poem of fantasy. made me smile. always good. have a wonderful day, sir Tabin. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you sweetie. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel "ethereal" that's where Randy and I fly. ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
My Dearest Tink, You are my chaos of the bubbling stream You are the moss of my nightly dream You are the candy of my Randy's pursue You are the light that lights up the blue. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA Thank you my dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
paullallady A delightful comment. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick You are a doll. ;squeeze: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie I'd need some to keep up with you. ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz You are always so kind. |
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