that beautiful astetic feeling

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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2007-06-22 08:03 AM

I love that astetic feeling
friendless/isolated
most baleful a mood
are you sinister
in your most homesick mind
tonight?
smouldering ochre of constant
inspiration
coincidentally came
the sweet sound
of your heart
lover
you are a riddle of humanity
which blossoms with age

wait

i sense change
erect sounds of art
stampeed into my mind
enthusaism
rolls softly
like a wave over midnight
ecstasy seals possession
eradically linking deep thoughts
a touch of faint breeze
whispers over my body
sensible
quieting swell canopies swirls
of mist
breathing in a southern ocean
internal joy leaves me trembling
with that shock of bitter sweet
i love so well

yes

I am well
my soul
in your eyes
on a radiant
torrent prayer
stretched out
to some horizon
opalescent suggestion
frozen flame
interser light
plumes and spirals
throb and whirl

strangely firm
this moment
remote
trickles emerald
shallow waters

ghostly amethyst

murmuring

delicate
nacreous
blues
lambent saffron
becomes stilling

remote

articulate
sounds
of
earth
irresistibly
stimulating

electrodes
defined

by some place
which brings me
to dawn

and

those soft whispers
of sea
which lap

gently
against
my body
hewn
by ancient men

far off distant sounds
inner
terrace
of soul

meanders life

solitary

love

alone
            but
                      not
                                lonely

    farmore

not really alone...

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (06-22-2007 11:26 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2007-06-22 08:11 AM

I love reading you Lee. It is always such a treat for the mind and YES, I agree with even though sometimes we can be alone, it doesn't mean that we are lonely. Sometimes? I savor alone. Love this, LadyLee.

No more hangin' on to the past
No more filling up my tomorrows
With yesterday's sorrows
No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt}

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2007-06-22 08:27 AM

you are a riddle of humanity
which blossoms with age

wait

i sense change

~*~

Funny, how quickly that spark ignites more...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-06-22 08:56 AM

Good morning, Lovely Lee. I find that the lush verbiage and the descriptive imagery in your writing, make all your poems very compelling reads.

Love to you this fine summer's day!

Linda
P.S. Do you mean "ascetic" instead of "astetic"?

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-22-2007 09:42 AM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2007-06-22 09:04 AM

yep, you are one of the poets here that's on my "must read" list!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-06-22 09:10 AM

"solitary
love

alone
but not lonely

farmore
not really alone......"

This is beautiful Lee J.
Such a wonderful write.

JL

What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively.
~JL

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

6 posted 2007-06-22 11:17 AM

what an amazing piece of writing, touching the readers soul, as peace settles around.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2007-06-22 11:44 AM

being happy with oneslf and in your own company , alone but not lonely

Hope

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2007-06-22 12:44 PM

Dear LeeJ

How beautiful is your creative spirit!

"smouldering ochre".....see what I mean?

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