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Without You
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
Without You I know that sometimes it happens - We part at the dawn of my love. My heart's going on, but without you When all of that pretty love is gone. Still dreaming, I look through the window, The snow melts, falling to the ground. But how can my love melt so suddenly? It seems to be everywhere around. And everything around remembers you, Without you the world for me is dead. Convincing myself I've forgotten you Is lying - I just can't forget Your voice, so soft, and your eyes, so deep, Those songs and so beautiful words... You opened the new, never seen world for me, And now I can't stay in this world. No, I won't cry, my tears are nothing for you, I know you're not worthy of it. I've got to pretend it's not painful to fall, But my heart's still ready to forgive. But destiny knows the story of us, And we know we're of different blood. The only salvation for us is to part, We both can't live through my love... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully bittersweet sad painful lonliness in the rough well done |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
powerfully emotive 'write'! especially fine ending: "The only salvation for us is to part, We both can't live through my love..." Applause! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow this one aches I love it! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lots of feelings here...James |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
nicely done... Thank you |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
Thank a lot, I'm glad you like it. |
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