I don't care I'm out of your lives...

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Open Poetry #40

I don't care I'm out of your lives...

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

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0 posted 2007-02-20 04:05 PM

I don't care I'm out of your lives -
To the world everyone is a stranger.
If you're cruel, you're bound to survive,
If sincere - in the end you'll surrender.

Everyone is a loner at heart,
Every place on the earth is forsaken;
Destiny, writing everyone's part
For the stage, so-called life, was mistaken.

Love has never existed at all,
It's a wraith of a desperate dreamer.
Lovers think they can fly - they just fall,
Hopeless liars and naive believers.

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

1 posted 2007-06-22 12:45 PM

I like this one!!!! specially this line:

"Lovers think they can fly - they just fall"

And I think that is why they call it 'falling in love'.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

2 posted 2007-06-22 12:49 PM

sounds angry, but I liked it

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-06-22 01:09 AM

angry but the feelings is true.

beautiful poem of anger at "love"

enjoyed.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-06-22 09:08 AM

Nice writing...James

paullallady
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since 2007-04-03

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Michigan

5 posted 2007-06-22 11:18 AM

even the thought of love, can create many emotions. This is so wonderfully expressed in your poem.

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

6 posted 2007-06-25 10:04 AM

I'm glad you like it.
Yes, I was very angry at the moment I wrote this poem.

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