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outside the box |
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Sincere New Member
since 2007-06-21
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Outside the box is the wiseman seeking sinecure Without marginilizing any miniature Knowledge is power, imagenation is too advance Also impowering is wealth, urged by mastering of self welfare and health are prone to be under the belt The poeets words aare more than just heard they're heartfelt So the listener recognises the poets views as his Outside box is the rasta man, anticlockwise twisted dreadlocks artificial heart specially designed to absorb shocks, millions invested in stocks With thoughts to change the world through media Because with that alone he make the inferior seem superior Poet lift the veil make the familiar things as if they were unfamiliar Tongue is power, it influence the my mind ,oppreser is so eloquent ,careful of what he preaches Outside the box -money is not the root of evil lack of it is Good things come to those who wait,phrases that keep the eye off the ball Im Black and I'll ball like the number eight For those who wait, they can join the cue and follow the white ball Outside the box is lines far from 9 dots, unorthodox thoughts going across the box resulting in paradox Because 8 corners are genocidal, never philanthropic Inside the box is a vicious cycle... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was not only a marvlous read, but an intellectual write... enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am pretty sure I've read this poem about seven times today, each time, getting a different take, a different scene, a different sense of timing and emotions. I like it when poets make me think. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great first post! Welcome to Passions! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sincere, thank you for leaving this fascinating write. It reads like a fine stirfry tastes, with overlapping layers of color, flavors and textures. I look forward to reading more. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Your word play is exceptional. Enjoyed your write very much. TD |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Welcome to Passions... this is a great first piece to share with us, I hope to read more of you .... Be well RDB  |
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