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Dreams_Lost_Forever
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since 2007-06-20
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0 posted 2007-06-21 03:52 PM


Silence..void of all words
This unmistakable darkness that consumes me
People around me seem to hear everything
But not I for I hear nothing....
So, quiet are my days and long too
I spend most my time writing...
Through at times it can be rather boring.
Life should be full of sounds to hear
But not in my world for it is dead to all noise
One day I wish to hear the birds sing
and the wind whistle thrown the trees...
I will tell you why I will never hear these wondrous sounds ever again.
It's because...I'm dead and have been for a very many centuries.
My name no one knows...invisible I am not to you but
everyone else.


I don't write a lot of poetry but I thought I would give it a try what do you think?? I'm so new to this all comments would be helpful!!

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2007-06-21 07:50 PM


Welcome to Passions! If you are truly a novice at writing, I say, write on! Anyone who makes the first attempts does so because something is waiting deep inside to find its way out.  You'll find that we have a lot of forums for you to discover, so let me be one of the first to welcome you.

And, please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

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KRJ

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-06-21 08:29 PM


welcome to Passions

I liked the first poem you posted

keep writing!

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