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Dreams_Lost_Forever New Member
since 2007-06-20
Posts 3Saskatchewan, Canada |
Silence..void of all words This unmistakable darkness that consumes me People around me seem to hear everything But not I for I hear nothing.... So, quiet are my days and long too I spend most my time writing... Through at times it can be rather boring. Life should be full of sounds to hear But not in my world for it is dead to all noise One day I wish to hear the birds sing and the wind whistle thrown the trees... I will tell you why I will never hear these wondrous sounds ever again. It's because...I'm dead and have been for a very many centuries. My name no one knows...invisible I am not to you but everyone else. I don't write a lot of poetry but I thought I would give it a try what do you think?? I'm so new to this all comments would be helpful!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! If you are truly a novice at writing, I say, write on! Anyone who makes the first attempts does so because something is waiting deep inside to find its way out. You'll find that we have a lot of forums for you to discover, so let me be one of the first to welcome you. And, please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome to Passions I liked the first poem you posted keep writing! |
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