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Open Poetry #40
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kyler
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since 2007-06-21
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0 posted 2007-06-21 02:42 PM


She isn't perfect
or stunningly beautiful
but she is who she is
being unperfect is a part of her
she shows whats underneath and nothing else
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MarkG
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1 posted 2007-06-21 07:27 PM

beautiful writing ...keep writing...i liked it very much...she shows whats underneath and nothing else.... hmmmmmmmm  
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2 posted 2007-06-21 07:54 PM


Welcome to Passions!  What is underneath the skin is the most beautiful part of a person, when they allow that goodness to shine through.

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passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-06-21 08:30 PM

welcome to Passions

excellent first piece
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