Open Poetry #40 |
Leave It Unsaid |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You toss the word around loosely like it means something to you but your actions ring louder than your uttered words do so please don't waste time saying it because you like hearing it spoke it no longer holds truth when to you, it's merely a joke; while trying to cling to what's already been lost but you never expected to pay such a very high cost. Don't bother expressing words not conveyed true they no longer mean anything when I hear them spoken by you.
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
words are only true when accompanied by actions... Enjoyed, Donna M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you said it lady...EXACTLY.
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
They say a man is as good as his word, so his word best ring true! Like yourself, I believe the true measure of a man is by his actions. Actions do speak louder than words! Hugs to you, Dear Donna, Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And you hold ALL the Aces! Well done, m'dear! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I have always heard, "Action Does Speak Louder Than Words". I have heard alot of words, but the action never matched the words. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"You toss the word around loosely like it means something to you but your actions ring louder than your uttered words do" Don't we all... JL What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A poignantly expressed truth, highlighting love's dark shadow. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
truth though sadly spoken. beautiful enjoyed |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Donna It is so easy for a poet to get caught up in the silken fabic of words and find it not as strong as thought. That hurts. |
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lacydee Member
since 2007-06-17
Posts 130Indiana |
yep, always heard, "actions speak louder than words". Good write. Dee as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! told like a true woman! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I needed this tonight. Funny how that happens Drawn to the words that we seek We are moths drawn to a light of the truth we seek Maybe. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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