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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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if we had been the sun shirts we would have cut ourselves shaving the shimmering from giggle stones on someday mornings when rivers were low enough in their sleepery to stream their bed beads reflectively unmade with shallow mouth laughter we enjoyed the slow sooth then of moments with strangers unknowing them thoroughly inside and out with a glance with our backs facing them and our faces looking back again at where we had not really been wondering if we had let go the kites on wind of dreams that someday would be memories we would wish we had forgotten ______________ daark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and our faces looking back again at where we had not really been wondering if we had let go the kites on wind of dreams that someday would be memories love these thoughts M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I don't know that such a tender should ever be forgotten... perhaps it was but a fantasy? Smiling at you. This is lovely doctrine, mud and all. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
that's just the way kites take to the wind, not to be forgotten... ~k |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"we enjoyed the slow sooth then of moments with strangers unknowing them thoroughly inside and out with a glance with our backs facing them and our faces looking back again at where we had not really been wondering if we had let go the kites on wind of dreams that someday would be memories we would wish we had forgotten" *but wishes don't always come true* Some things run too deep to forget. Tattoos, you know? Truly moving, D. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your imagery never ceases to amaze me. This moved me, D.  |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
this brought tears to my eyes..beautifully expressed darling!!! I couldn't even pick a favorite part it is all perfect.\ in my eyes. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs, thanks hon for the read _________________ donna thank you for your woman touch ________________ ms sun, nothing should be forgotten I think, thanks ms _______________ kahlil thanks for reading and replying _______________ regalone, we would sip the dark wine that oozed our skin in patterns of permanent dreams thanks babe _______________ angel lady, thank you for the eyes and soft side feelings |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
D There is something magical about the way that you spin words. Reading your poetry is like eating dessert - it's a pleasure to be savored. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yessss... I agree with Alison, Dessert and Daark both start with 'D' and are delicious!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lil A, hope you are always hungry for more lady friend..thanks _______________ ms rb, thanks to you for stopping by also ms |
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