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The Taste Of Broken Dreams
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The Taste Of Broken Dreams |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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. ...chill stainless slick memories of youth, the sordid shreds of sentiment's prayers sifted through pathos of wistful blindness shrouded by love's listless longing for lies, woven from life's petty wanton denials, reflected brittle beauty of heart's sad desires; endlessly echoing mindless contempt.... ©2007 by icebox . |
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MarkG Junior Member
since 2007-06-21
Posts 48California USA |
well ice box your words are cool, and complex I keep reading this and have to go back and find the meaning of the rhyme...the word play is fascinating and again complex...someday i'll figure it out right now its still an intriguing puzzle in my mind...keep it up |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
It's a taste you never forget. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox  word candy and heart sounds sordid shreds of sentiment's love's listless longing brittle beauty endlessly echoing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always touch |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The all of this is touching and so full of truths but this "shrouded by love's listless longing for lies," absolute pefection. Your words often move me.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
if broken dreams are all one knows then, one will expect very little of life and the upside is...all things are wondrous in their eyes.... very descriptive, and well done |
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