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lacydee
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0 posted 2007-06-19 09:17 PM



~~~Selfish Tears~~~

I don’t know why I’m crying,
I’m trying very hard to not
I know where my friend is now,
he’s reached the goal he sought.

I guess I’m crying for myself,
for these are selfish tears
And I cry for other friends,
he made throughout his years.

And I cry for all the family,
who must carry on alone
I also cry some happy tears,
knowing that he’s Home.

I guess I cry because I must,
for crying is what I do
And when you leave and Home you go,
I’ll cry selfish tears for you.


By Dee Lacy
10/28/06
at the loss of a dear friend, Joe Chudy

By lacydee


© 2006 lacydee (All rights reserved)

as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord.

© Copyright 2007 Deanna Lacy - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-06-19 10:55 PM


so very sad.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-06-20 04:45 AM


yes, I know

"for crying is what I do"

I understand that line well

I'm sorry for the loss, my friend

lacydee
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3 posted 2007-06-20 07:41 AM


thanks so much for reading and commenting on my poem, and also thanks for the sympathy. He's been gone nto quite a year, yet I still miss the big lug. Hugs from, Dee

as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord.

The Lady
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4 posted 2007-06-21 10:28 PM




beautifully written

Sunshine
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5 posted 2007-06-21 11:36 PM


This brought me back close to three decades, to a "loss" that just wasn't, or shouldn't, have happened.

And yes, his name was Joe.

Thank you, Lacy.


lacydee
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6 posted 2007-06-22 08:35 AM


thanks so much lady and Sunshine, for both of your comments. Sometimes it does help to write things down in order to cope. Dee

as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord.

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