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my battle
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my battle |
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Patryck Junior Member
since 2007-06-15
Posts 11 |
all my insecurites, and all of my fears are all of the reasons i keep tasting my tears i'm reminded as they flow down my cheek i want to be strong, but deep down i'm weak if you could understand, if you could get in my brain mabye you could help me deal with this pain im still young though, this battle's not done and i won't stop fighting til happiness is won i'm just a kid, with my whole life ahead i gotta stop cry'n at night in my bed i got to be happy, and ill try at all cost cuz life without happiness, is a life that is lost [This message has been edited by Patryck (06-20-2007 10:01 PM).] |
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Dooglam New Member
since 2007-06-20
Posts 5Pasadena, CA |
this poem speaks of cold truth. i really find it compelling. Great job! |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
time and patience are not able to keep with our pace...i have been where u are and I am still trying to get beyond the reach of unhappiness..it is a battle everyday, but everyday i get closer to loving myself...nice and real piece u have written. |
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lacydee Member
since 2007-06-17
Posts 130Indiana |
life without happiness is, for sure, a life that is lost. very well written. Dee as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord. |
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