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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2007-06-20 02:38 PM


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A lagoon
Green
With summer

The small slender
Island’s trees
Cast shadows
Beyond its shore

Feeding shiners
Crumbs of bread
Dropped between boards
Of a wooden bridge

They shimmer
Together
In golden light
We share our joy


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-06-20 02:52 PM


beautiful. a cool summer song and again romantic.

beautiful.

enjoyed as always.

have a wonderful day!!!!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2007-06-20 03:19 PM


such memories you've brought back


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