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Fire mountain (an impression)
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Fire mountain (an impression) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Fire Mountain Beyond the verdant plain of foothills rippling in the mist, rainbows dance on Fire Mountain through the pensive-velvet clouds, brushed in soft scarlet and burgundy by a gentle, timeless sunset-kiss. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Take a bow, poet.Your fine-tuned descriptive imagery allows this grateful reader to see the vibrant colors of a Fire Mountain sunset. |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Secondhanddreampoet, This is a good poem. I’m not familiar with Fire Mountain. However, I think it could be any in the Appalachian chain. I’m very familiar with them, originally coming from Altoona. It’s a good description. Bobby |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
absolute diamond poem !!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Bruce! Lovely work! A fine painting of what I have yet to see in my lifetime. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
exquisite... ! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A fantastic poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet, A beautiful bouquet, It reads like the smell of a flower. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
WOW! This is really beautiful!!! And thank you for all your comments on my poems. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A grand thanks to all the fine 'P.I.P.-land' poets who commented on this 'write'!! |
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