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Open Poetry #40

Fought the Good Fight

tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

0 posted 2007-06-18 08:50 PM

It was pain that crumbled me
shed me into a thousand little pieces
but as the sun set in the west
I rose again from my death
to see my life form again

My love had been strong
My love had been loyal
but in the end what was good I lost
due to this Iam alone
Alone I shall remain til I find the one again

Can't say he will be the same
Know I say he will be better
He will be my true knight and shining star
He will stand tall against them all
I will love him like none other

So I continue on each day
my new life forming as I speak
He is out there waiting for me
I can taste his air as he breathes
As it gets nearer I await the day

This time around I will know its the right thing
And I won't look back not ever
I will take his hand and the journey will begin
Don't hate me cause I dream
In the end dreams come true

Its up to you to erase it or form it
This time I will face it head on
Fight my way into his arms
In the end when all is said and done
I will have faught a good fight
My battle will have been won

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

[This message has been edited by tatalinia (06-19-2007 10:29 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-06-19 03:06 AM

there's nothing like starting a new life, is there?

makes a person feel good

thanks for the smile in this dark night

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-06-20 07:22 PM

excellent, emotive and 'heart-felt' write!

[one small point though...I truly believe that
especially work of this quality would look so
much better (and have even more 'impact') in a
script color other than red on blue which tends to
cause a rather 'distracting' optical illusion of
movement/'vibration'!?]

MUCH applause!!

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