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FNG
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0 posted 2007-06-18 05:45 AM


I was rejected a day ago.
Couldn't sleep a wink,
Teared into the sink.

How come it's so bad?
I haven't known him for long.
The pleasure of having fun together
so precious, like I never have it before.

Were we only friends?
or for a minute i thought it was something more.
An illusion?
but my heart aches
when u reject.

You must have carved something inside my heart,
but it's non-intentional
just willingness on my side.

Well, friends we will be
Have a smile and go along with it.

There's no difference in friends and lover,
minus the intimacy.
I guess i can do without it.
Friend, my friend, we will just be.

© Copyright 2007 Danielle Tan - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2007-06-18 08:48 AM


sometimes the things friends share are more intimate than lovers...
Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-06-18 03:07 PM


This is good.

enjoyed


passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2007-06-18 06:39 PM


sometimes I wish I could go back to being just friends with a certain man

but that's not happening

good write

FNG
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4 posted 2007-06-22 06:05 AM


thanks for grazing through beloved pip fellows i enjoy reading your sharings so much.
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