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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Arms raised With the fingers Of both hands She combs her hair Light Takes its time Flowing down The contours Of her curves The air sighs As if remembering Flowers listening In the fields Again she draws The eyes of men Despite two thousand years . |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I find this 'write' to be particularly fine! especially: "The air sighs As if remembering Flowers listening In the fields" sustained applause!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
wonderfully done. A living image captured in the words a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very beautiful and soft as a clouds flowing through me. One sees it. One touches it. but one can not hold and own it's spirit. enjoyed and thank you for sharing the beauty. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I sigh too |
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