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Open Poetry #40

Miss Suicide Eyes

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2007-06-17 06:29 PM

She comes again, Miss Suicide Eyes,
Her glances made of knifes,
Cutting in so deep
To eat the skin.

Every look a razor blade
Cutting all the scars away.
She sees them bleed again
And her smile will not fade.

That knowing crescent grin
Wide and seeping dirty blood
Below a half light halo
Over everything

Behind your smile, Miss Suicide Eyes,
Clouds have bloodied up the sun
With a muddy afterglow
And cut the light out
From its soul.

Is it cold in there?

Hangovers are nature's way of preparing us for liver failure.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2007-06-17 09:07 PM

Interesting use of sharp image without actually saying what's implied. I like the way you skirt the edge but still leave vivid stains on the retina.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

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