Open Poetry #40 |
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my best friend |
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Patryck Junior Member
since 2007-06-15
Posts 11 |
The image of your smile stays with me through the day And even when I sleep, in my dreams won’t go away And all I want from you, is for you to be a friend That every moment were together, never I want to end My heart breaks with yours, but is whole when yours is too That’s why I’m never jealous, when I’m seeing him with you I’ll never move on from you, because my love is true That’s means I got your back, no matter what say or what you do If you ever need a friend, to lean on when your down I’m yours to be leaned on, because you’re the best friend I have found I can act like your not that special, but oh, you really are U light up my world, you are my shinning star My best friend, that you are, whom I never want to part But I know we never could, because you’ll always be my heart. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
so beautiful and moving. So beautiful and touching. So soft a song of heart. Friend...the best kind. enjoyed happily |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Patryck. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Beautiful, Patryk. You sound like a good man and a true friend. Welcome to PiP. Alison |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Welcome to Passions! This is such a beautiful poem of friendship. |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
Truely heartfelt. Welcome to PIP! ~Winter~ "I used to worry what people thought of me, then I broke through my cacoon" |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Patryck~ Welcome, Welcome, Welcome to PiP~ Best friends keep us grounded in the circle of love~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Patyrck... Welcome!! I loved this post of yours... I can't imagine life without my best friend either.... well said.. Be well RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Me thinks you want more than a friendship...James |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments to share with a friend Patryck ... Welcome to Passions! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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lacydee Member
since 2007-06-17
Posts 130Indiana |
awww...this is so sweet and filled with such love. lacydee |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
very nice sentiment. Friends like that are hard to find. I hope you enjoy your time here. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Wanting everything good for a friend...A great virtue. |
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roxy_rox New Member
since 2007-06-18
Posts 2NSW Austalia |
that's a great poem!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Welcome to PIP! Nice poetry, hope you enjoy the family and friendship! ~ARh |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
Nice piece, I'm with James Micheal though - sounds like you want to ne more than friends. |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
very heartfelt and packed with emotion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome to Passions! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful, Patryck. Look forward to reading more of your work. Also, welcome to PIP. I hope you enjoy yourself here. Hugs, Ethel |
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Patryck Junior Member
since 2007-06-15
Posts 11 |
I wouldn't mind being this girl's boyfriend, but shes in a relationship and i'm perfectly happy just being her best friend. i've been her friend for a long time. thank you to everyone who replied. |
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