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Open Poetry #40
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
0 posted 2007-06-15 07:15 PM


Maybe we can rest
Our head against our
Bed and realize our
Solitude is confined
To the rooms we enter.

Like the shade of
Saturday, it cannot be changed,
It awakes on the sixth day,
And sleeps into the 7th.

The therapy of familiarity,
The compass we take to
Resolve ourselves through the
Scent of our clothes.

The unknown that spies on us,
Will trade Saturday for our
Chance to greet Sunday when we wake.
© Copyright 2007 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
1 posted 2007-06-15 07:18 PM

I especially liked this stanza.

"Like the shade of
Saturday, it cannot be changed,
It awakes on the sixth day,
And sleeps into the 7th."

Very well done and much enjoyed.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2007-06-15 09:03 PM

well done!
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