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fanatic-flyer
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since 2007-02-07
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Bournemouth

0 posted 2007-06-14 05:49 PM



Crying
I feel the rain cascade over my dress
Huddled in this doorway
My tears fading over my delicate cheeks
Nobody I asked wanted my say

Crying
I tried so hard
My life feels like a fire
Burning everything in its path
I tried hard, but no I couldn't aim higher

Crying
Life rejected me
I felt like death
But this one night
Its so silent I hear my breath

Crying
Time slows
My hand reaches and clutches
He takes it back
My fingertips he touches

Crying
He leads me away
My doorstep forgotten
Like all those memories
As if they turned rotten

Crying
My life turns
That one night
That one time
I fight with all my might

One more time
Forget all those memories


(made while listening to thanks for the memories by F.O.B)

Thanks for everything, because everything makes the world happy =)

© Copyright 2007 N W - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-06-15 03:14 PM


Sad poem

Lots of Crying

But I felt the emotion
and enjoyed the wriing.

Alison

fanatic-flyer
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since 2007-02-07
Posts 26
Bournemouth
2 posted 2007-06-15 04:57 PM


thank you, thats nice to hear

Thanks for everything, because everything makes the world happy =)

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