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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-06-13 06:18 PM


‘Monument’ Valley (Arizona)

Ominous ‘cloud-ship’ apparitions
riding a mazarine ‘sea’ of sky…

desert lightning and rainbows
beyond crimson mesas
(Deep-Time’s ruined sentinels)
painted by sunset…

reluctant road runs through…

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (06-13-2007 09:23 PM).]

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Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-06-13 07:21 PM


beautiful again. as always.

enjoyed.

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (06-14-2007 01:23 PM).]

the concrete rose
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2 posted 2007-06-13 07:35 PM


look out the window and see the dreams and the thick clouds embracing the scene.

Wicked man. gave me a good picture of Arizona's beauty.
Cheers.

ArtSolstice
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3 posted 2007-06-14 11:46 AM


I'd have posted a reply sooner, but I had to look up the word "mazarine" in the dictionary. Not trying to be a wise-guy, I really didn't know what it meant ...

This is beautifully written!

Midnitesun
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4 posted 2007-06-16 07:45 PM


Sigh, to read
is to immerse myself
in your fine mazarine sky,
to listen to whispering  
spirit winds
of the mesa,
sunrise and sunset.
  

Midnitesun
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5 posted 2007-06-16 11:02 PM



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