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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2007-06-12 04:33 PM


Fall oh yellow orb
And let the shadows absorb,
Make my cool darkness
Where I can walk from brightness
For these eyes do shun
The sad summer just begun;
When there’s too much light,
And not near enough of night,
For my comfort’s sake;
Least my somber spirit break
To despair passed gloom
Cowering this lightless tomb
Which I call a home
Beyond cats here all alone.
There is not to do
For summer days are not few
And sun melts me down
And heat makes me slowly drown,
Where is my darkness,
Perhaps in coming thunder
And those dark clouds that wander.

Gloom


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Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-06-12 04:41 PM


it is so very good. I need some darkness.
truly


Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2007-06-12 04:43 PM


Pleased you enjoyed
thanks for taking the time to comment

Gloom

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2007-06-14 06:39 AM


well we have had the storms and thunder and lightning and darkness 2 days in a row...enough to wish for some nicer evenings...at least in my opinion


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4 posted 2007-06-15 12:35 PM


me too.
I am already ready for Fall.

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