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Open Poetry #40

Love When I Wanted It

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-06-12 06:02 AM

Love When I Wanted It

There was a
time in my life
when I wanted
to know love
and then it
tapped me on
the shoulder
like a stranger
in the night
that thought they
had every right
to know me.

JamesLee
12June
2007

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-06-12 06:41 AM

how dare the intrusion!

LOL

I know what you mean James

a fine write here

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2007-06-12 07:39 AM

Good write, James. Perhaps all things that come to us start with the initial "want" whether we are aware of it or not.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-06-12 02:31 PM

good poem and I shout out, lucky you!!!

beautiful

enjoyed

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

4 posted 2007-06-12 02:40 PM

Quite enjoyable... thank you.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2007-06-12 05:00 PM

Very much enjoyed your concept James. I like the idea of something intangible sneaking up to touch you. Nicely handled.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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