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Open Poetry #40
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Thekidfre'
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since 2005-11-19
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0 posted 2007-06-12 12:20 PM



The moon was lit by a mind to perceive
Our acceptance acquired by the thoughts we breathe

Visions not versions of the lives we lead
Only to fail in the most complex faith to achieve

What do you want when the truth is real?
Already identifity and classifieds as what we feel

Sadness of the soil that speaks of drought
We can only imagine what kind of love nature talks about

But yet we know But how to understand
Their level of communication is out of our hands

A voice and name sounds like recognition to most
For all we are is encrypted inscriptions blessed by a holy ghost

Ah this comfort I know so very well
Kind of like a a refuge from a living hell

Our thinking and Our actions must represent Love
For this is true translation of the one from up above

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-06-12 02:23 PM


quite a thought.logical, philosophical, and poetic. beautiful.

enjoyed

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