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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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0 posted 2007-06-11 07:27 PM


You planted a bitted cherry  
You whispered that in summer
you would give me a tree
so I could bloom smile upon
and chat with honey bees
now, I see no leaves
only a big shadow under me
and  it bothers my feet


[This message has been edited by Drauntz (06-11-2007 11:36 PM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2007-06-12 04:53 AM


another great one!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2007-06-12 05:51 AM


Enjoyed...James
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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3 posted 2007-06-12 07:46 AM


Sometimes it's hard not to step on the shadows - they're just there before we know it.  Enjoyed!
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