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Loyal Forever.....
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Loyal Forever..... |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Loyal forever, was the catch Pessimistic was my smile Your net was simple words All that a girl wanted to hear But along the game, something changed Feeling grew, dreams evolved A slight sign of hope for a better tomorrow Heart was healed, ready to give And you came in ready to steal Swiftly my heart was stolen We are forever enslaved By our uniqueness Turning back is not a choice Giving up is not an option It is one of those true things For better or for worse By each others side we will stand It is the true meaning of a best friend A true lover… and a real heart Jen--->MindBodySoul [This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (06-11-2007 05:09 PM).] |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Jen , another beautiful one and romantic. good. enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic! I love this! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Powerful and emotive ‘write’! grand line: “We are forever enslaved By our uniqueness…” applause!! |
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