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Aqueous Dreams. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Where does the heart go? When day folds easy into billowing blackest brilliance? When dreams come drifting to minds with simple graceful elegance?Like plashing waves on sheening shores. Life a sea, rising and falling, rolling and motionless, adrift with breeze, moon, stars and inward spiraling heart, to be freed from earthly bonds. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I often wonder where the heart goes... good to read you again |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
to be freed from earthly bonds.... yes those earthly bonds, it is wonderful to be freed... This was my favorite line... J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.” |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
I compleatly enjowed your piece . Reminded me of when I lived on the beach at grand Isle, La. Adagio |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
excellent ‘write’!... [a grand-fine slice of impressionism pursuant to Nature and Romanticism!] one tiny question: should the word in line 6 be ‘splashing’ with a space after the ‘?’...? long-sustained applause!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful truly. enjoyed, |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Dixie.. Thank you, very good to have you read my poetry again... Goldenrose ARH...Yeah..thanks... GR Adagio...glad i could bring back some memories..thank you... GR SHDP..Glad you enjoyed my poetic 'write'..no plash is exactly what i wanted to use... http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/plash Drauntz...thank you, glad you enjoyed.. GR Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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