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Jenna
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since 2007-03-20
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0 posted 2007-06-10 01:37 PM


Let me go
your heart does not need me anymore
who are you trying to fool?
I will relieve you of your duties
you are free to go
back to the place where your heart now resides.
Free my heart from yours
untangle it now
and cut the ties.
Remove all thoughts of me from your mind
I am blocking you out too.
Leave and dont look back
chase the shadows from our past away
and move on.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-06-10 06:05 PM


Usually a period of extreme frustration and disappointments lead one to this not so easy choice...James
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-06-10 06:34 PM


oh, this is very sad poem but very practical.

many thing grows out of  love.


enjoyed as always

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2007-09-26 05:47 PM


Easier said then done...sometimes things are not what they seem.

Nice write!

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

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