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luvvbuzz
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0 posted 2007-06-10 05:46 AM

made this today for my poem

  

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2007-06-10 04:22 PM

This is a great inspirational poem for someone in need of seeing their own strength. Well done, much enjoyed the message.

Best wishes,
/Kit
luvvbuzz
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since 2007-03-23
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2 posted 2007-06-10 04:24 PM

oh bugger, i missed out the word 'to' in the last line! thanks for the feedback anyway
Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-06-11 12:01 PM

marvelous!!!
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